Fiona

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We are studying narrative this term and as a starter we watched a video on Whitby Abbey. We then wrote this narrative in small groups, crafting short sentences to create tension and including inconsequential information to really set the scene. Fiona, Emily and Taylor's story is below, please click play on the first slide and the rest will automatically turn the pages, after 15 seconds.

What a great short story Fiona. I like how you have used various sentence starters to make your writing really interesting.

Beautifully written personification text about the hands of a clock. Well done Fiona!

Wow, what a story. I love how you built the tension for the characters by using powerful descriptive vocabulary. I was also relived to read the concluding part, which explained the robot was all part of the main characters imaginary game. Good job!

For our 'Super U' unit in term two we learnt about the power of positive thinking and how a fixed mindset can hold us back from reaching our goals. The children wrote songs about how to be a hero and achieve, no matter what life throws at us ...